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Reviews For For Duty and Honor
Author's Response: Thank you! Snape would know. ;) Lemming bits are components of several suicide potions....
oh gods oh gods oh gods....is Sirius dead??? but awwww, Snape/Harry bonding going on here! yay-ness! Author's Response: He's really most sincerely dead! I decided that if Sirius was to die, it was going to be a definite death, unlike canon.
this is a wonderful chapter! I love this story! I also like that you update often! Hope to see another update soon! I can't wait for when Snape goes to the Dursley's. I have heard that writers like to hear helpful criticism... but I don't know what would make this story any better. I like Snape's character even if it is Ooc a bit. I hope to see them working together better in the future and not just Snape wonderng why he cares... but this early in the story it's good you are working up to it! Update soon! From your ensnared reader! Snape126 Author's Response: I admit, that he is a little OOC, because I've had him evolve. In the books, Snape is more of a 2D character, because everything is from Harry's POV, and how well does one know one's least favorite teachers at his age? After all, don't teachers sleep under their desks? ;)
Author's Response: He could have, I suppose. But Sirius, unless he's in deep hiding, becomes a liability in a story like this. I hated it when JKR killed him, partially because she killed off Harry's only real support, and because of the method. I mean, really, throwing him through the veil of death? How ambiguous can you get?
Author's Response: You'll find out, I promise. Let's just say that he's grieving, which doesn't help matters any.
Author's Response: 'Fraid not. By now you have discovered that I am eeeeeevvvviiiiil! ;) I'm, um, rather infamous in JAG for killing characters off. I was nice to Sirius, really. I mean, I didn't run him over with an ambulance, crush him in a garbage truck, or bake him in the world's largest pecan pie. Then again, Sirius isn't Clayton Webb.
Author's Response: Yes, yes he does... for now. *laughs evilly and refuses to answer the question of if Sirius will survive the night...*
*grins* BRILLIANT. Really, it is. DIE UMBITCH DIE!!! I hate that woman with a passion that borders on obsessive....and she's not even real... ah well. Great chapter though. Loved the pranks. Good idea! *shakes fist* She'll get hers!! Author's Response: :) One of these days I really will have to kill her off. I mean, I'm infamous for killing certain hated figures in other fandoms... baked one of them into a giant pecan pie once.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm attempting to stay close to canon characters and situations. This is a partial rewrite, after all.
Author's Response: Thank you! But the Ministry action is not quite over with yet... more coming in chapter eleven. |
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