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Title: Libertas 22 Jun 2006 5:29 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great line: you have all the self-preservation instincts of a lemming!   Very funny.


    Author's Response: Thank you!  Snape would know.  ;) Lemming bits are components of several suicide potions....
Title: Libertas 22 Jun 2006 3:53 am
Reviewer: Aytheria (Signed) [Report This]

    oh gods oh gods oh gods....is Sirius dead???

     but awwww, Snape/Harry bonding going on here! yay-ness!



    Author's Response: He's really most sincerely dead!  I decided that if Sirius was to die, it was going to be a definite death, unlike canon.
Title: Libertas 22 Jun 2006 2:38 am
Reviewer: Snape126 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    this is a wonderful chapter!  I love this story!  I also like that you update often!  Hope to see another update soon!

    I can't wait for when Snape goes to the Dursley's.  I have heard that writers like to hear helpful criticism... but I don't know what would make this story any better.  I like Snape's character even if it is Ooc a bit.  I hope to see them working together better in the future and not just Snape wonderng why he cares... but this early in the story it's good you are working up to it!

    Update soon!

    From your ensnared reader!

    Snape126



    Author's Response: I admit, that he is a little OOC, because I've had him evolve.  In the books, Snape is more of a 2D character, because everything is from Harry's POV, and how well does one know one's least favorite teachers at his age?  After all, don't teachers sleep under their desks? ;)
Title: Libertas 22 Jun 2006 2:32 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Go Snape! Hehe.. I like the way the Department of Myseries worke dout. But poor Sirius is still dead! Oh well, I guess Snape couldn't of got Harry with Black around. I like his decisions at the end. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction :)


    Author's Response: He could have, I suppose.  But Sirius, unless he's in deep hiding, becomes a liability in a story like this.  I hated it when JKR killed him, partially because she killed off Harry's only real support, and because of the method.  I mean, really, throwing him through the veil of death?  How ambiguous can you get?
Title: Libertas 22 Jun 2006 2:21 am
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How will Harry react to Snape getting custody of him? Look forward to your next update.

    Author's Response: You'll find out, I promise.  Let's just say that  he's grieving, which doesn't help matters any.
Title: Pacem vel Libertatem 20 Jun 2006 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Brittany.. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked it.. But you are a very kind person and won't let sirius die, right? But I really do like it so far..

    Author's Response: 'Fraid not.  By now you have discovered that I am eeeeeevvvviiiiil!  ;) I'm, um, rather infamous in JAG for killing characters off.  I was nice to Sirius, really.  I mean, I didn't run him over with an ambulance, crush him in a garbage truck, or bake him in the world's largest pecan pie.  Then again, Sirius isn't Clayton Webb.
Title: Pacem vel Libertatem 18 Jun 2006 7:55 am
Reviewer: Aytheria (Signed) [Report This]
    oooh, YES, SIRIUS LIVES!!!!!! (so far...*wringes hands nervously*) Well, veeery good chapter. Found it quite amusing how Harry and everyone tricked the Dementors. Only complaint could be that everything's moving just a little fast, but that's ok, it doesn't really detract much from the overall quality of the story. ^^

    Author's Response: Yes, yes he does... for now.  *laughs evilly and refuses to answer the question of if Sirius will survive the night...*
Title: Verum quod Deceptio 18 Jun 2006 7:36 am
Reviewer: Aytheria (Signed) [Report This]

    *grins* BRILLIANT. Really, it is. DIE UMBITCH DIE!!! I hate that woman with a passion that borders on obsessive....and she's not even real...

    ah well.

    Great chapter though. Loved the pranks. Good idea! *shakes fist* She'll get hers!!



    Author's Response: :) One of these days I really will have to kill her off.  I mean, I'm infamous for killing certain hated figures in other fandoms... baked one of them into a giant pecan pie once.
Title: Orsa 18 Jun 2006 7:00 am
Reviewer: Aytheria (Signed) [Report This]
    Hm, so far so good. AND you managed to make Snape seem in character while at the same time, help Harry. Good job!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm attempting to stay close to canon characters and situations.  This is a partial rewrite, after all.
Title: Pacem vel Libertatem 17 Jun 2006 11:55 pm
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter!  Oh, I was on the edge of my seat throughout the whole ordeal at the ministry.  Looking forward to another update...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  But the Ministry action is not quite over with yet... more coming in chapter eleven.

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