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Reviews For For Duty and Honor
Author's Response: *blush* Why thank you! Hopefully, you will continue to enjoy this little trip into the Potterverse.
Author's Response: I think that Harry's natural tendencies to suppress things combined with Snape's tendency to justify everything that doesn't fit in his worldview worked against this in canon. Well, that and according to the classic boy hero archetype, Harry must rise from an abusive homelife, stand alone, and overcome great evil. (That's also why Dumbledore and Sirius had to die in canon, but I digress) However, if we're going by a true reality check, the Dursleys' treatment of their nephew mostly likely would have been tagged whilst he was in primary school. He would have been taken into care at that point, Dudley also unless his Aunt Marge took him in, and Vernon and Petunia would have ended up in jail. (And yes, I am considering a story about that...)
A very nice chapter - I especially love your treatment of Umbridge. That horrid woman deserves it! It's quite heartbreaking to read your story and think about how a few small changes can make a huge difference. Severus telling Harry about the Prophecy and keeping him from dashing off to the Ministry ... it's done very well I think. Author's Response: Thank you! And isn't it? Just a little bit here and there can change how things go. I'm attempting to just make some small adjustments to canon and see where it leads. :) And Umbridge has yet to finish her come-uppance. I'm glad you like this, and I hope you stay with it. -Bratling
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm working on it.
Thank you for great story--- I am always looking for an update. musicsteph Author's Response: You're welcome. :)
Author's Response: Tune in next week...
Author's Response: :) Thanks! Well, it'll be updated again in a few days...
This is a great story I am pleased that Snape has realised that Harry is not a spoilt brat and hope that they become closer please update soon. Harrys mate Author's Response: Thanks!
Ooh, great chapter! I hope Harry's early discovery of the two-way mirror means that Sirius won't die ... please? Pretty please? Author's Response: *smiles innocently* You'll have to wait and see. I like Sirius... |
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