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Title: Animadverto 26 Apr 2006 1:37 am
Reviewer: Achilles (Anonymous) [Report This]
    If Snape sent Harry to McGonagall, then that means he didn't get a chance to look in the pensieve. And that's a good thing. Also, one little nitpicky thing. Umbridge made him write "I must not tell lies" not "I will not tell lies". At least, that's what happened in the American edition. I don't know if it would be different in other editions. I like this Snape better. UPDATE SOON!!!

    Author's Response: *smacks head* oops!  We missed that.  Fixing it...  I've never read the British version.  :) And that was part of why I did it like that; I'm fixing some of the stuff that I didn't like in the book.  I'm not saying that Harry won't find out, but it didn't really seem very Snapeish to leave someone unattended in his office...  I'd think he was too paranoid for that.  Thank you for reading!
Title: Eventus 25 Apr 2006 12:33 am
Reviewer: ckat44 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! This story is fantastic! I am so glad to see another good Snape and Harry bonding fic pop up and it's exactly how I like it with a splash of originality. It looks to be really angsty too and thats great! I can't wait for more. I hope you update soon. This story was such a treat to find!!!


    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you're enjoying this.  I update on Tuesdays, so another part will be here tomorrow.
Title: Eventus 22 Apr 2006 6:26 am
Reviewer: horse girl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hi great story

    Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Title: Eventus 20 Apr 2006 12:34 am
Reviewer: Achilles (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What would happen if Umbridge found out about Harry's homelife? Would she try to make him go back or something? Maybe make a decree saying students can't stay at Hogwarts over summer? Great chapter. UPDATE SOON!!!

    Author's Response: I decided before I wrote it that this story should focus more on Harry's recovery, the fallout from the revelation, and acquiring a family than on the actual abuse. While that might be interesting to see while she's still 'teaching,' Umbridge won't find out about the Dursleys until much, much later.  Harry's friends aren't about to talk, and the staff avoids talking to her.  Only Dumbledore, Poppy, Snape, and McGonagall know at this point.  The other Heads might be informed, but it's not general knowledge that Harry has been abused.  :) Glad you're enjoying this, and it'll be updated next week!
Title: Eventus 19 Apr 2006 6:58 am
Reviewer: Kasey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice update.  I think I already said that I liked Harry's character in this, it's not to pouty and I also like Snape's character.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I've often wondered why in stories of this nature that ff authors make Harry do the poor-pitiful-me routine.  It doesn't suit him, and it's not the norm for survivors of abuse...
Title: Eventus 19 Apr 2006 6:52 am
Reviewer: Kasey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice update.  I think I already said that I liked Harry's character in this, it's not to pouty and I also like Snape's character.
Title: Eventus 19 Apr 2006 6:07 am
Reviewer: Fairycatcher1 (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVLY!



    Author's Response: thank you!
Title: Eventus 19 Apr 2006 5:36 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, yay! :D Harry has a support group! I love how Ron comforted Harry and talked about Bill and Charlie taking care of the Dursley's. I also liked how Harry and Hermione, Ron and Ginny all hung out and talked - that's something that's missing in a lot of stories. it's kind of weird that Harry has all these adults saying that they are here for him nowthough. Wouldn't he feel a little bit mad at them? I like how harry is just having normal nightmares. Good development! Post more soon please!! :D

    Author's Response:

    One of the things I like about the books is that his friends are his support system.  I don't think this kind of thing shows up enough in fanfic.  As for the adults, well, they're feeling guilty for not protecting the one child desperately in need of it and they're reacting to that. 

    Harry is mad still, actually, it's just buried beneath a heck of a lot of confusion at the moment.  There will be a return of angry Harry, but right now he's unbalanced and trying to cope.  The Voldemort dreams will be coming back--this is still currently filling in everyday space that's glossed over in OOtP.  His own mind is providing enough horrors to keep him sleepless at the moment without Moldywarts intruding.

    Glad you're enjoying this little jaunt! 

Title: Eventus 19 Apr 2006 3:01 am
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]

    What a lovely chapter!

    So, who will become poor Harry's guardian? Snape, I hope - especially if you can do it in a realistic way rather than another "oh, the Headmaster has offered me too many lemon drops and I can't refuse him anything" ... you know, the way that these things often happen. I'm sure your way will be more creative though! 



    Author's Response:

    It's in the cards.  And as a kind of a change, because I think it's clichéd and overused, I don't intend to have the Headmaster ask Snape to do it, either.  You'll have to wait and see.  *laughs evilly* 

     I'm glad you liked this one.

Title: Eventus 19 Apr 2006 1:19 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I reallly like this fic and the Harry angst!

    Author's Response: Thanks.  :) This will be updated again next week, same bat time, same bat channel.

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