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Reviews For For Duty and Honor
Title: Orsa 27 Mar 2006 7:59 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Ouuuu... great start! Very nicely done with writing and unfolding the opening chapter. You've managed to pique my interest and enjoy it. I like the events that played out- it flowed very well and it wasn't stale. All are in character, very much so, and the fandom aspect of Severus and Lily was handled well. You did a good job incorporating new canon into a past year. Great pace, and good intensity. I want to read more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  This is my first attempt at Harry Potter fic, actually.  I aim for as IC as I can manage, and I'm planning on a very slow evolution of their relationship and altering the OOtP timeline a little.  I'm hoping for regular updates, but I can't guarentee anything.  This is a WIP, so it's not finished, though I do have some buffer.
Title: Orsa 27 Mar 2006 7:59 am
Reviewer: greeneyes (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a wonderful story!  Severus is so reluctant and bitter, but he'll still do what he has to, both to appease duty and his oath...your characterization is fantastic, and I loved how you made Harry realistic for an abused child as well.  Thank you so much, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I always wondered why no one noticed that Harry's homelife wasn't very good.  I mean, when a child comes back much, much lighter after the holidays, there must be something wrong.  And with the way they dressed Harry compared to Dudley's attire, why was it never noticed in Primary school?

     The next chapter is from Harry's POV, and the chapters alternate that way.  Frankly, with the abuse that the Dursleys canonically give him, it really wouldn't be that much of a surprise if he was physically abused as well.

    Glad you're enjoying it! 


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