Good chapter. I like the feeling you give - flowing freely and easily along. My one complaint is Harry's attitude in Azkaban. Considering how he freaked out with the dementors in the third book and a little in the first of the fifth book, I expected him to react much more strongly to their presence in the prison. Quite literally, these things are his worst nightmare, and he should panic at least a little when going to a prison full of them.

I like your writing and look forward to more from you.