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Title: Helping 19 Sep 2006 8:21 am
Reviewer: Adams Sunshine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ok, still loving it lol, and definitely wanting you to update.
Title: Helping 11 Apr 2006 7:14 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]

    And the plot thickens as Lucius enters. We're scared now.

    Keep up the good work.

Title: Helping 07 Apr 2006 4:43 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Nice chapter! :) Harry is adorable as usual. I loved how Snape made thepotion, but Harry ruined it and then Snape was mad, but wasn't really. Poor Harry. he seems to be adjusting rather well though. Lucius is rather a surprise.

    Typos: "I was trying to help, he cried,

    Here you have a paragraph repeated: How unlike him, thought Severus as his friend did the complicated spell. A new door appeared in the hallway and Lucius gave an overly grand gesture to show him the room. It was decorated in greens and silvers, which was certainly like Lucius even at this age, and was already furnished with the bare essentials.

    thought Severus as his friend did the complicated spell.

Title: Helping 07 Apr 2006 12:08 am
Reviewer: star (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey i really like your story very creative. have you read spiorads at fanfiction.net its called back to being a baby there seemes to be a few things that sound the same. dont take this the wrong way but some people might think you plagerized sence she published it way before you. if i were you i would change it a little or if you got the ideas from her contact her and ask her if you can use them or just give her credit or something.

    Author's Response: I assure you that he won't be staying little for long, I have never read that story and any similarities are completely coincidental.
Title: Helping 05 Apr 2006 8:46 am
Reviewer: Kasey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is great, I love little Harry he's so adorable.  I also like Snape's character, he's good with kids.  Please continue, and great job.

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