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Reviews For Define Family
And the plot thickens as Lucius enters. We're scared now. Keep up the good work.
Nice chapter! :) Harry is adorable as usual. I loved how Snape made thepotion, but Harry ruined it and then Snape was mad, but wasn't really. Poor Harry. he seems to be adjusting rather well though. Lucius is rather a surprise. Typos: "I was trying to help, he cried, Here you have a paragraph repeated: How unlike him, thought Severus as his friend did the complicated spell. A new door appeared in the hallway and Lucius gave an overly grand gesture to show him the room. It was decorated in greens and silvers, which was certainly like Lucius even at this age, and was already furnished with the bare essentials. thought Severus as his friend did the complicated spell.
Author's Response: I assure you that he won't be staying little for long, I have never read that story and any similarities are completely coincidental.
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