Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Define Family
Title: The Werewolf 10 Apr 2006 4:13 pm
Reviewer: Moongrl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nah the relationship isn't rushed considering the past relationship standards Harry had with his relatives, it would be natural for him to either cling to a person who is kind to him or to freak out around everyone, i personally liek the option you took. I really like this story so keep up the good work! :D
Title: The Werewolf 07 Apr 2006 4:47 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah... you are rushing. Harry calling Snape Daddy works and is charming, but you are rushing with Harry and Remus and Remus and Snape especially. It rather seems OOC to me. You are shifting away from the purpose of the archive with this chapter. Remember that the main purpose has to be Snape and Harry Gen. I changed your rating to be G-T/.

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