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Reviews For Checkmate
You know, this is just like a really bad car wreck. YOu know you shouldn't look -- but can't help checking it out. And making Draco into a semi-goodguy is just icing on this cake!! If you only had a Mary Sue, but then in someways, I guess anyone in this story could be considered that.
WOW, are these people acting stupidly. Harry was never this dense in the books -- especially when it comes to reading the newspapers and believing them. I can't wait to see what happens next, you've got things so OOC, I can 't predict anything.
This was hysterical : "A/N- in case you’ve forgotten, the dementors have NOT left Azkaban yet. I am just saying that they conveniently didn’t see the Death Eaters escaping, if you don’t like it, tough, after all: my story, my rules." I'll translate -- my characterization is totally off of canon and my plot has inconsistancies the size of Texas... and I don't care!! Thanks for the great chuckle.
Author's Response: hmm...I acknowldge your opinion, but disagree. If you want to know why, check my livejournal. |
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