Yup fqanfiction is right, this needs more.
| Title: Prologue
| 20 Jun 2011 3:19 am
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| Reviewer: SaloraSlevina (Anonymous)
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Please, oh please, will you write more chapters for this story? I already absolutely adore it. *sigh* Now, I sound over-bearing. No pressure. I can wait, but I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapters because I can see how well of a story this is going to be. Good luck.
This was very sweet, even though Snape seemed a bit out of character. Nicely done, I would enjoy seeing more from this storyline!
Frosty
This was very sweet, even though Snape seemed a bit out of character. Nicely done, I would enjoy seeing more from this storyline!
Frosty
| Title: Prologue
| 14 Jan 2008 12:12 am
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| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous)
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Wow, I can only agree with the readers from ff.net: PLEASE, continue this story. ^______^
Your Melfis. ^^
| Title: Prologue
| 10 Nov 2006 6:04 am
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| Reviewer: +Karen (Anonymous)
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You gave Snape a decent personality. I liked that. This piece was very well written. I feel that you could really make this into a longer piece though. 'Anyway, please continue writing, and thanks for the ride.
Awww, sweet one-shot! :) I think taht I reviewd this on fanfiction.net but I'll review it here too. I think what I liked best about this story was the matter of fact way Dumbledore said what happened to Harry, without it feeling as it was just a summary in a story- it actually seemed real. I can't wait to see how Harry's life will change and how he will react to it. You may want to make sure that your future dialouge always start a new paragraph with a new speaker.
Ah, tear!!! That was so sweet.
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