Amazing. Awesome. I think that I might use that word too much for you. XD But it is really good- what's compelling about this story is the story itself and your writing fits it beautifully. i love your descriptions and everything that goes on. Poor Harry. This story is such a treat! Baby Harry is so cute, but what mischeif he gets into! A fire? Geez. Haha. I felt it a little strange thatthe burned crib could be repaired to be justas new. to me it wasn't quite realistic, but I really, really enjoyed the "adventures" baby Harry had that started the fire, how he got out of his crib (sans the socks! hehe) and I especially love plushie Hedwig and all the mentions of it.

I love the moments between Snape and Harry where Snape is treating Harry nice, and actually comforting him. Beautiful. Poor Mrs. Weasley, I think that you handeld her character and the way you started her absence and distance from Harry very well. I wonder what Dumbledore has on Snape, and if Snape is not supposed to get close to Harry. He seems more against the idea than his own reasons would warrant. I love the way Harry says "Nape!". You have done a wonderful job with Harry! I wish that you would go back and edit the little mistakes in the earlier chapters and polished it up a bit. I can't help butworry that some readers might get the wrong impression of the story at first and miss out on such a treasure. Thank you so much for posting it here!