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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
At the end of this chapter you mentioned that people were saying that your story was unrealistic that simany things don't happen at once. All i have to say on the matter is that your story is fine, and obviously those people are luck and have realtively calm peaceful lives, and have never had anything real truely awful happen to them like say 6 of their relatives die in the same month all in completely seperate incidences. Shit Happens, and to quote mother terissa--"God never throws more at you than he thinks you can handle, i just wish that he didn't trust me so much." Author's Response: I never heard that... the Mother Terissa quote. Oh and about my author's note... no one was being particularly rude in their reviews... just gave advice. I was only wanting to warn those with similar sentiments that a lot more was going to happen to Harry- in case they'd like to stop reading or something.
lots of going on with Harry, that is exactly reason I love your fic! Your fic is angst-freak's dream! again wonderful chappy! Please write again soon! Ps. I'm happy you aren't putting too much weight on romance stuff. Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like the way things are going. I'm not much of a romance buff. And I didn't want people to get the wrong impression of my story because I mentioned the dances.
Author's Response: Leaving to where? You won't have access to the internet or something?
You are definetly evil! Such a cliff hanger! Hmm... what does Dumbledore mean? And is there going to be any more Harry and Snape angst/bonding? I also think its cool that you put the author note so that we knew what was going on, and gave an explenation. Most authors just say something along the lines of "Shut up with the complaining if you dont like the story too bad". Good job with this fic! Update soon!!!! Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like my fic! As for my author's note... I don't mind people saying bad things about my fic, opinions are opinions. I didn't want to be rude, but I wanted readers to know that I wasn't going to change the way my fic was going...
Wow! Great chapter! I love your characterizations.... they're simply wonderful. Anyway... wow, the next chapter is "Explosion"! That sounds like a Potion's accident to me! I can't wait, let's see some brutal injuries that only Snape can tend to! Excellent chapter... and I eagerly await the next one. You are a very talented author. Keep up the excellent work! Saphire Starlet Author's Response: I was quite happy with the next chapters title. I felt... clever... I hope it lives up to expectations!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you think so. I don't really feel like I'm getting better. But perhaps it's experiance?
Author's Response: I'm glad the DADA teacher is freaking you out. That was my intention. It's hard to write an original character... at least I think so. I don't have JK Rowling's amazing introductions and character developement to rely on for a good character.
Even though it is agonizing waiting for more fatherly moments from Snape towards Harry, I know it is going to be even more satisfying when the story gets there at its own pace. I also love your defense professor. At first I thought he was being mean to Harry because of his small size, but now I am thinking that maybe he is the only professor who realizes that Harry can't physically keep up with 16 and 17 year olds in his 11 year old body. I hope the other professors will come to realize this soon. I am surprised that you don’t have more reviews, particularly on Fanfiction.net. Maybe you could try changing the summary, because your story is far better then many of the stories with hundreds of reviews.
I hope you update sooner then expected, because I am really looking forward to it!
Author's Response: My beta helped me with my summary. Is it better now? There's only so much space allowed for a summary on fanfiction.
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