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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
what I live in Poole in Dorset. Your right it is very pretty with lots of green fields and pretty quaint villages dotted through out the county. Large towns as well lots of history, and the sea just up the road including the harbour which is the second largest natural harbour in the world only to Sydney in Australia. Author's Response: Cool! It sounds awesome... I'm really excited to find someone from Dorset. I hope to do a lot of research on the county before I write any scenes in it. I look forward to your reviews... it would be wonderful if you could point out errors or something. I would hate to mess up the area completly.
Author's Response: Why thank you Jan! I always look forward to your reviews (almost as much as I look forward to muggleville ^_^ updates). This chapter was difficult for me to write and took a long time, so I'm glad that it turned out okay. Again, thanks for commenting.
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't think about that. I mean the only two people who agree with Harry's decision are Harry and Snape... And one can't really describe Snape as "happy".
Author's Response: Well Sll you don't "suck" at reviews. Perhaps you didn't have as much to say here because of all your juicy reviews/suggestions that you already gave me ^_^.
A few typos in a couple of chapters, but nothing bad -- I believe you blotched up Filch's name once and I'm pretty sure it *boomslang* instead of "bloomslang" and a word missing here and there, but otherwise... If I have to guess at the reference to AYLNO, then I'd say - though I coul be way off - that you're referring to the lay-out of the hall in Snape's rooms; that or the 'invisible door.' So, please tell me: how far was I off?
Author's Response: I plan to update asap. I'm really busy with school though... Right now, I have about one and a half pages towards the next chapter....
Wow, what can I saw but this story is great. The last few chapters actually had me in tears. You had me even feeling sorry for Draco.I really liked how Harry didn't even have to think about it but said yes to Snape adopting him. More please. |
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