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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Fall Out 10 Aug 2006 10:04 am
Reviewer: Claris (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've just discovered this story and am really enjoying it. You are good at keeping the story from Harry's point of view, which is very difficult.  I like the fact that you have kept Harry's experiences of the Dursley's close to Canon and that the reconciliation between Harry and Snape has been a gradual one. I assume in the first chapter that Vernon let Harry out of the cupboard to go to the bathroom.... I look forward to reading more.
Title: Fall Out 30 Jul 2006 6:50 pm
Reviewer: Fairycatcher1 (Signed) [Report This]
    awwwwwwww i love it! wonderful art thou!
Title: Classes Continue 27 Jul 2006 9:49 am
Reviewer: LdBriah (Signed) [Report This]

    At the end of this chapter you mentioned that people were saying that your story was unrealistic that simany things don't happen at once. All i have to say on the matter is that your story is fine, and obviously those people are luck and have realtively calm peaceful lives, and have never had anything real truely awful happen to them like say 6 of their relatives die in the same month all in completely seperate incidences. Shit Happens, and to quote mother terissa--"God never throws more at you than he thinks you can handle, i just wish that he didn't trust me so much." 



    Author's Response: I never heard that... the Mother Terissa quote. Oh and about my author's note... no one was being particularly rude in their reviews... just gave advice. I was only wanting to warn those with similar sentiments that a lot more was going to happen to Harry- in case they'd like to stop reading or something.
Title: Fall Out 25 Jul 2006 8:52 pm
Reviewer: Brittany (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, 2 whole chapters! I was only in the hospital a week! Well, one of them might have been out before but anyway, I really likes them. Snape and Harry are talking again, it was.. cute, kinda, I dont know.. But I really liked them.. Malfoy did deserve it.. And they did realise that he couldn't do everything a 16 year-old can.

    Author's Response: You were in the hospital for a week? I hope you're doing/feeling okay now. Thanks for the review.
Title: Fall Out 24 Jul 2006 4:48 am
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    Hurrah, happy chapter! I like that Snape and Harry are getting along again and that the misinterpretations on their parts were cleared up.

    I also liked the side note about Ron sending the first Weasley jumper; it was cute that Harry kept it, but was embarrassed to wear it. Awww. Anyway, nice chap. Thanks for the update.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you noticed the jumper. I felt a little clever about it myself. I was assuming that Harry kept most of his clothes from the past. Because I didn't really feel like trying to explain where he got all the clothes from. I suppose they could come from Molly like all the other clothes.... but eh... glad you like it.
Title: Fall Out 24 Jul 2006 12:29 am
Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Signed) [Report This]

    AWWW!!!!  Adorable... I loved this chapter... it gave me a nice fuzzy feeling!

     The ice is broken!  Thank you for the chapter!

    Saphire Starlet



    Author's Response: Thanks! I was shoting for the "adorable/fuzzy feeling" chapter. I was worried about drifting over into "corny" land or perhaps even "long and boring." Thanks for the encouragement.
Title: Fall Out 23 Jul 2006 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whooo!!! I love it, now that Snape's available to Harry. That was long in coming. Great job on this chapter. :) I liked how Harry was reading that book about the caves, nice touch. I'm glad that Harry can practice DADA now and that his detentions for that teacher are limited to a day only. Yay for Harry. Thanks so much for posting!


    Author's Response: Thank you for you continued support and reviews!! I'm glad that you liked Harry reading. I wanted him to pick up a little hobby, to sorta be a kid while Snape took care of things for him.
Title: Fall Out 23 Jul 2006 9:47 pm
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a great story. I'm glad Harry and Snape have finally talked out the problem. Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like my story. I'm also glad that I finally got to them talking out the problem too.
Title: Fall Out 23 Jul 2006 9:11 pm
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad that they finally got that sorted out between them - not that the angst on the way of getting to this point wasn't appreciated. Sweet ending to the chapter - please update soon.


    Author's Response: I rather enjoyed writing the angst. But I couldn't wait to get to the nice Snape. Really, I'm thinking "just adopt him already" because I enjoy the "Snape's Harry's Dad." But I want to develope a relationship between them first. Hopefully I'm achieving that... 
Title: Fall Out 23 Jul 2006 7:53 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I love the misunderstanding between the two, and how they came to an understanding. Perfect!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I was hoping that the misunderstanding was not too... um weak.

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