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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
Harry acts so small even though he tries acting his age. I like that about this story. It keeps the child in Harry rather have him acting the age he actually is in just a smaller body. Keep up the great work! Update Soon! Author's Response: I was hoping to have a balance between an eleven year old boy that has the memories of a sixteen year old...
Love it, love it, love it. Poor Harry. I really liked that all these things seem to be happening, that he lost his control, refused to do things and is having a "temper tantrum". I'm really curious as to what is wrong with Snape. Is Voldemort hurting him with the cruciatus, other deark people or is it something in the Order like Dumbledore who is doing this to him? I'm so curious. Great chapter, good development. Author's Response: Thanks! HHhmm I don't know how else to respond without giving my secrets away. Never fear though, answers will be coming soon.
Author's Response: Yes, I could say that it surprises me that it took so long, but I wrote it that way. Although, by now, they've all realized how hard things have been for Harry.
Author's Response: Yes, I agree on the tension... time to let up.
lots of going on with Harry, that is exactly reason I love your fic! Your fic is angst-freak's dream! again wonderful chappy! Please write again soon! Ps. I'm happy you aren't putting too much weight on romance stuff. Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like the way things are going. I'm not much of a romance buff. And I didn't want people to get the wrong impression of my story because I mentioned the dances.
Author's Response: Leaving to where? You won't have access to the internet or something?
You are definetly evil! Such a cliff hanger! Hmm... what does Dumbledore mean? And is there going to be any more Harry and Snape angst/bonding? I also think its cool that you put the author note so that we knew what was going on, and gave an explenation. Most authors just say something along the lines of "Shut up with the complaining if you dont like the story too bad". Good job with this fic! Update soon!!!! Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like my fic! As for my author's note... I don't mind people saying bad things about my fic, opinions are opinions. I didn't want to be rude, but I wanted readers to know that I wasn't going to change the way my fic was going...
Wow! Great chapter! I love your characterizations.... they're simply wonderful. Anyway... wow, the next chapter is "Explosion"! That sounds like a Potion's accident to me! I can't wait, let's see some brutal injuries that only Snape can tend to! Excellent chapter... and I eagerly await the next one. You are a very talented author. Keep up the excellent work! Saphire Starlet Author's Response: I was quite happy with the next chapters title. I felt... clever... I hope it lives up to expectations!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you think so. I don't really feel like I'm getting better. But perhaps it's experiance? |
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