Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Start of Term 16 Jun 2006 4:05 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm fascinated with your story!!!  Yes, it flows better and there are fewer grammar/spelling mistakes.  I feel sorry for Harry and Snape.  Harry needs someone so badly and there is no one for him.  Snape was kinda there for him, but it looks like he has to go back to who and what he was.  I was surprised that Snape did not try to teach him occulumency while he was growing up.  I was also surprised that with his spending time with Snape at different ages that it didn't have some type of effect on how he was growing up.  Anyway, I hope you had a good semester and sorry about the Organic Chemistry.  Those isomers are a bi***.  I also hope you have an excellent memory!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad that you like my story. Oh and I have a horrible memory.
Title: Start of Term 15 Jun 2006 10:11 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I need to figure out what happened to some of the edits we made that disappeared when this was uploaded.  I KNOW I fixed the spelling of Filch's name! ;-)

    Author's Response: Uh oh. I'll try and go fix it.
Title: Harry Birthday, Harry 15 Jun 2006 8:05 pm
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    I am amazed that this is your first fanfic. It's incredibly well written; you've got the characterization down really well and you're able to keep the pacing at the appropriate level. I've found that that's one of the toughest parts about writing fanfic. I look forward to reading more of your great work.
Title: Start of Term 14 Jun 2006 4:56 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter.  Ron and Hermione are ic.  I'm looking forward to how to have Harry and Snape relate now.  Will we get to the detention next chapter?
Title: Start of Term 14 Jun 2006 2:36 pm
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, but I think he did learn a little respect for Snape over the summer. I'd like Snape to talk with Harry and explain what he thinks is taken for granted.
Title: Start of Term 14 Jun 2006 1:07 pm
Reviewer: curlybean3 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter.  Can't wait to see how classes and detention go.  Can't help but feel sorry for poor Harry.  Things are going to be a bit different between Him and Snape now.  It will be interesting to see how things turn out.
Title: A Summer's End 09 Jun 2006 10:48 pm
Reviewer: Pokey1984 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent!  I am really looking forward to reading more of this.
Title: A Summer's End 07 Jun 2006 5:02 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Again another perfect chappy!  I certainly enjoyed reading it! I'm looking forward seeing next chapters!

Title: A Summer's End 07 Jun 2006 2:53 am
Reviewer: Ari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice work, enjoyed the chapters.  Keep updating.
Title: A Summer's End 04 Jun 2006 10:53 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Great job! I really like this fic but I think we need some more hard core Harry angst and some Harry/Severus bonding. :)

     ~Jan


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