After slipping on the shirt easily he spent some extra time trying desperately to snap his jeans shut, but the button was just too hard and his little fingers didn't have the strength.

I left most of my comments at ff.net, but came over here for the second reading.  As a mother of six, I really loved the little detail quoted above.  I don't know how many jeans I have snapped for my kids.

Smiling to himself he was pleased to see that his t-shirt was black and so was his jumper.

I also like the subtle way you are showing through Harry's clothing preferences that he is wanting to imitate Snape now--very much as a son wants to look like his father.

As I have said before, I am loving the creativity of this story.  If you could find a spelling and punctuation beta it would really help the flow of the story, though.

I really enjoyed the chapter.  I can see that Snape is starting to care for Hary, even though he is fighting it every step of the way.  Harry, of course, is so eager to have someone to trust and to care for him that he's already in it whole-heartedly.

So, what's up with the Dursleys?  Obviously (I think) they are under some sort of curse.  Does Snape know why they were acting so strangely?  Will we find out sometime soon?

Can't wait to see how everyone reacts to a de-aged Harry.  The poor kid is in for a hard time, I'm sure.  I really can't wait to see how Snape and Harry treat each other.  Oh, the possibilities...... 

Author's Response: Yes there's something up with the Dursleys and you'll find out later. And Snape has some sort of idea, but he's not sure yet...

I meant to write this awhile ago, but something happened and the review I wrote was deleted and I had to get to school or work or someother place, and I never wrote another.  So I thought this story started out a little rocky.  I wasn't quite sure where it was going or whatnot.  Anyway I kept reading (so it wasn't bad enough I quit! ;) )  And then it got really funny and cute! So the moral is it is turning out woderfully. keep p the good work. :D  

This story is so sweet..=)

I`ve never liked the stories were Harry is turned into a baby. This one is the first one. It`s so well timed; and the relationship between Snape and Harry so well developed... that I`d be looking forward for your update

At first I find it a bit humilliating the fact that in his mind Harry was a sixteen years old boy but his body was one of a baby. I think that thats the difference with the others stories; this one is written from Harrys point of view...

"Stupid old codger, lock me up, feed me sweets. I'm sure that'll do the trick. By the time I face Voldemort I'll be as fat as Dudley. Powers the Dark Lord knows not, yeah right- unless you count the ability to suck on lemon drops." jeje that was so funny =)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm trying to keep my story sort of like JK Rowling's, she normally does everything from Harry's pov. Besides I think it helps the reader fell more like Harry, they can worry about what he worries about without knowing everything.