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Title: Diagon Alley 21 May 2006 2:15 am
Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Love it!  Please update soon!

     Saphire Starlet

Title: Diagon Alley 20 May 2006 8:07 pm
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]

    I really like this story. It's sweet without being overly gushy, and I like the way Harry can still think for himself though he can't always express it. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Hopefully, you'll stretch it out for a while and not end it too quickly.



    Author's Response: I'm hoping to make my story book length... with one big main bad guy and problems. And then a bunch of little issues along the way. So the story will stretch out for a while...
Title: Diagon Alley 18 May 2006 9:34 am
Reviewer: C. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't believe this is your first story! I am amazed because this is so good! It is really interesting and very original! I can't wait for the next part so please update soon
Title: Diagon Alley 17 May 2006 9:34 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an incredible story.  You have managed to take some of the more traditional elements of these kinds of stories and make them your own.  I especially like the fact that Harry has his 16 year old mind, but with the physical needs of a baby or child.  This has quickly become one of my favorite stories.

    Author's Response: Thank you. When I started writing this I had only read one other fanfic (AYLNO) so I really didn't know what other fanfics were like.
Title: Diagon Alley 17 May 2006 7:51 pm
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]

    EEee! Love it, absolutely love it.

    I like how you have Harry remember how old he is. Different.

Title: Diagon Alley 17 May 2006 6:22 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Again, wonderful chapter. Haha it was great how Harry's acting like a child, wanting to get outside, pretending to walk on the ceiling... the crazy ball was great! I loved how Snape caught it like it was just a children's toy. Poor Harry not being able to see lupin and forgetting his photo album. I loved how they went to Diagon Alley and how Harry looked like a "mini Snape" in his black outfit. :) I liked how Hermione and Ron found him. I'm so glad that order Members were looking out for him. But then he had to disobey and go for icecream! Silly Harry, but it was okay, they were his friends. LOL at how Harry was pretending to protect a sore butt, and how there was a crowd of anry wizards waiting for the loo. LOL! I loved the line Snape gave about just waiting 5 minutes and then Harry was in trouble. Great job with Harry! He's so mischievous, I quite enjoy him!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I wanted to show that despite the fact Harry had his 16 year old mind, he was still prone to five year old ways. I've come to notice that aspect is much like you're Muggleville story. (I hope you update that btw).

Title: Diagon Alley 17 May 2006 2:32 am
Reviewer: kally (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This fic is great i really hope you update again soon. The only problem i have is that in some of your chapters things written in itallics and repeated in regular font so i end up reading some sentences twice and it gets to be a little confusing.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I don't know why the italic texts repeated. Someone said they would help go back and delete them, because every attempt I make at it doesn't stick and they just come back. But also I have this story posted on fanfiction.net, with the same title and pen name- there's no repeated sentences there.
Title: Diagon Alley 17 May 2006 1:02 am
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow, this is a fantastic story - very well-written, and you have a great way of showing emotions that isn't too heavy-handed or intrusive. I'd really like to read more - where is their last stop? Do they go to the Dursleys to get the photo album, and if so - how will Snape react to the Dursleys' treatment of Harry?

    One point which is not quite clear to me, perhaps I wasn't reading carefully enough - how old is Harry now exactly? 



    Author's Response: In the baby chapters I was figuring him to be just a little over one, a bit before his birthday. Although I don't say exactly how old he is because they can't really pinpoint his age. And then in the young child chapters I figured he was 4-5 years old (but again they don't know exactly). I didn't think it was all that important for Harry to have an exact age.
Title: A Painful Transition 17 May 2006 1:01 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    WOW!!!! Amazing chapter.

    I forgot to mention how much I loved the mentions of Snape and his burnt toast. I noticed that that is what Snape usually eats and it was a nice thing to add in. Makes the story seem like there are more nooks and cranies to explore in the characters. :) It made SNape seem very human. I also forgot to mention how much I adored the way the Order members passed Harry around during the meeting, having "fun" and the way it was all from Harry's POV as he was dozing. Great job on that, I think that this story has so many good scenes.

    "He wanted to crawl away and hide- perhaps being a baby wasn't so bad after all." Nice build up. Poor Harry.

    I love this new turn of events. I loved how Harry woke up and went to Snap eand then Snape helped him with Legilimency. Great job with the attic and the robes not being Sirius'. I really thoughtthat they were. The room only being visible to Harry is interesting- I had thoughtthat it was all a plan of Voldemort, the necklace and the thoughts and everything. Fantasic, great chapter! Great story! Thank you so much for writing and sharing it! :D 

Title: Diagon Alley 17 May 2006 1:00 am
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow, this is a fantastic story - very well-written, and you have a great way of showing emotions that isn't too heavy-handed or intrusive. I'd really like to read more - where is their last stop? Do they go to the Dursleys to get the photo album, and if so - how will Snape react to the Dursleys' treatment of Harry?

    One point which is not quite clear to me, perhaps I wasn't reading carefully enough - how old is Harry now exactly? 



    Author's Response: In the baby chapters Harry is a little over one. Since he's given the Age Accelerator Potion he ages a little faster than normal and grows to just a bit older than when his parents died. And then in the young child chapters Harry is about five. I don't ever say exactly how old he is, just about how old he seems. I figured that exacts didn't really matter and the other wizards can't use charms to figure out the age specifically either.

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