Thanks for these engaging chapters, and for the end to the story that I can easily imagine!
Nice little twist at the end.
Oh, wonderful chapter end.
Oh dear, totally awful for poor James.
I wish that they could call the Muggle police or simply bring James safely to the wizarding world.
I hope they can offer more protection soon! Thanks for the engaging story.
I love that they were doing meditation to center themselves before defense practice.
| Title: Chapter 3: Settling In, and Start Searching
| 28 Jun 2023 11:40 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This doesn’t sound like a good situation at all. I wonder if Dumbledore could simply go to Privet Drive and ask Petunia where Harry is.
| Title: Chapter 2: Problems and Missions
| 28 Jun 2023 5:32 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Does Dumbledore’s locator spell point to Privet Drive, in which case Snape could disillusion himself, or is Harry totally off the radar? I’m intrigued!
Great start, hewing close to the original.
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