Great start, hewing close to the original.
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| 11 Jan 2009 8:05 am
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| Reviewer: bookworm3418 (Anonymous)
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applaudes. Absolutly amazing,you put an essence to the charecters that makes you keep reading. Continue with you exalince.[spelling is not my forte ;-] ]
| Title: Chapter 1 : Mistakes
| 25 Jun 2006 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: lancer (Anonymous)
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I am curious. Why did you rewrite Chapter one? Seems to me it was pretty good that way JKR wrote it. I'll stick with the original, thank you, and avoid your writing in the future.
| Title: Chapter 1 : Mistakes
| 24 Jun 2006 3:35 am
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| Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous)
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This chapter was a nice summary of SS, look forward to where you go with it.
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