Great story! your original plot, the way you write, and your characterizations, drew me in instantly. Not many stories do that for me anymore but you have succeeded greatly! Cannot wait for more to come :D
Great story! your original plot, the way you write, and your characterizations, drew me in instantly. Not many stories do that for me anymore but you have succeeded greatly! Cannot wait for more to come :D
| Title: Chapter 6: Fall Back
| 02 Jul 2006 8:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Hariverse (Anonymous)
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They've got the proof that the Dursley's are abusing him. Why don't they bring it to the wizarding world and get Harry out of there???? From the last line, I'm wondering what Harry did to them?
Author's Response: Well, it would be difficult to involve the wizarding world, if the muggles have been gathering evidence against the Dursleys. So therefor snape called the ambulance. There's also the slight factor of him being shocked by James' appearance, and not having his wand downstairs. (plus it makes for a more interesting story, but hey, don't we all do things like that!)
Author's Response: Well, it would be difficult to involve the wizarding world, if the muggles have been gathering evidence against the Dursleys. So therefor snape called the ambulance. There's also the slight factor of him being shocked by James' appearance, and not having his wand downstairs. (plus it makes for a more interesting story, but hey, don't we all do things like that!)
| Title: Chapter 3: Settling In, and Start Searching
| 28 Jun 2006 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Catti666 (Anonymous)
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Hmmmmmmmm... Looks really interesting. I might guess what is going on in Dursley household but I'll wait for you to confirm it first. Please update soon!
| Title: Chapter 3: Settling In, and Start Searching
| 28 Jun 2006 4:47 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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That was quite a set up. You have really gotten my attention. I'm making a lot of guesses about what is going on, but I'll wait to see what you do. I hope you write more.
| Title: Chapter 3: Settling In, and Start Searching
| 27 Jun 2006 7:26 am
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| Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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update soon i look forward to read more soon
| Title: Chapter 1 : Mistakes
| 25 Jun 2006 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: lancer (Anonymous)
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I am curious. Why did you rewrite Chapter one? Seems to me it was pretty good that way JKR wrote it. I'll stick with the original, thank you, and avoid your writing in the future.
| Title: Chapter 3: Settling In, and Start Searching
| 24 Jun 2006 7:48 pm
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| Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed)
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Hmm, in the basement, hunh? I'm interested in seeing more.
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