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Title: Ciego 26 Jun 2006 6:53 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Its a good start. Is Harry going to be blind through the whole thing? Sometimes that gets annoying. Also you have the tendency to put a / right before an apostrophy.

    Ex. Don/'t, I/'t, you/re

    You just might want to watch that.

    Update soon!
    ~Jan

Title: Ciego 26 Jun 2006 6:52 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Its a good start. Is Harry going to be blind through the whole thing? Sometimes that gets annoying. Also you have the tendency to put a / right before an apostrophy.

    Ex. Don/'t, I/'t, you/re

    You just might want to watch that.

    Update soon!
    ~Jan

Title: Ciego 25 Jun 2006 2:30 pm
Reviewer: harry-draco (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Great story so far. Please continue and write more soon.

    bye

    harry-draco ^.^

Title: Ciego 25 Jun 2006 8:50 am
Reviewer: sharkiepatronus (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This looks like it could go somewhere great. Please continue.

Title: Ciego 24 Jun 2006 7:40 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Do continue.  It sounds pretty interesting and it's well written. 
Title: Ciego 24 Jun 2006 1:43 pm
Reviewer: aguila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This seems to be an interesting story. I just want to point out that there are many spelling mistakes and that it would be better if you didn´t use things like (Harry refuses...). These explanations work better when we see why he came to the conclusion and it is worked in the plot. But despite all this it seems to get interesting. Please update soon

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