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Reviews For Blind
Its a good start. Is Harry going to be blind through the whole thing? Sometimes that gets annoying. Also you have the tendency to put a / right before an apostrophy. Ex. Don/'t, I/'t, you/re You just might want to watch that. Update soon!
Its a good start. Is Harry going to be blind through the whole thing? Sometimes that gets annoying. Also you have the tendency to put a / right before an apostrophy. Ex. Don/'t, I/'t, you/re You just might want to watch that. Update soon!
Great story so far. Please continue and write more soon. bye harry-draco ^.^
This looks like it could go somewhere great. Please continue.
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