Harry seems totally thrown off by Snape’s capricious manner. I’m looking forward to their relationship developing towards stability.
I thought Severus liked instilling fear in Harry?
Nice story-but you did make a small mistake. Dumbledore always calls Harry-> "Harry" not "Mr.Potter" I think you meant that to just be Snape. This happens when Dumbledore asks, "What are you doing here".
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| 15 Mar 2009 2:46 am
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| Reviewer: vindr (Anonymous)
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"Dumbledore noticed there wasn’t an air of hysteria surrounding the boy, and therefore decided that an attack by Voldemort or his Death Eaters was out of the question. “Actually, I was, Severus. I haven’t seen my GRANDCHILDREN in…” he seemed to pause a moment for calculations before continuing."
Dumbledore's gay!
Aww poor Harry... How crappy to not really be wanted by anyone, lol. I like the part with Albus and Severus, perfect. The part when Snape mumbles after DD leaves was so funny! Great stuff!
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