Oh no, this guy is positively evil. I’m so nervous for Harry.
What a painful incident. It was nice to see Snape act remorseful.
The island is such an intriguing setting.
I appreciate how direct Snape is being with Harry. Their brief repartee at the end was fun.
So much apparating! I like how Snape is observing Harry and trying to be gentler with him.
Harry seems totally thrown off by Snape’s capricious manner. I’m looking forward to their relationship developing towards stability.
I reading this again, and am just as hooked by your opening chapter as the first time!
Wow. Gonna be honest, I'd be scared shitless (I'm a very petite 5'2", 95-100lb girl) but I'd definitely try and say something...or at least I'd talk someone bigger into saying something, if I saw this.
| Title: Guardian
| 31 Aug 2020 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Ann (Signed)
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