Nice story-but you did make a small mistake. Dumbledore always calls Harry-> "Harry" not "Mr.Potter" I think you meant that to just be Snape. This happens when Dumbledore asks, "What are you doing here".
What a great story! I've off to read the sequel!
OMG Jeb! The arse! I hope Sev can find them and save his Harry!!!
I don't exactly understand what "That" look is that Jeb is giving Harry, but I do see that he his a freaggin psycho! I'm glad Harry had the smarts to hide his money bag in his cloak, but i'm wondering if it'll stay hidden for long, or if he'll lose his cloak. I mean, at least if anything happens he has a full Gringotts account....right?
Jeb is so crazy...*cringe*
Okay, I've just read this story in one go. 10/10 on account that it's 1:50 am and I am going to be sooo tired tomorrow but it's worth it, why? because I really could not stop reading. I am not even going to open up the sequels until there is some sun light up and about or then I'll really be screwed. Thanks so much for the awesome story!
woooooooooooooooooo go Snape!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Oh, yay. ^^ I've got warm-fuzzies, now. Nice fic!
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