Seriously Harry? Must you always do this? You could have told someone, you know. Why do you think that Voldemort would leave you of you give him the prophecy? I logged in just to berate you of your stupidity. Really? You had to after it, didn't you? I hate you for this!
Harry clearly didn't learn the first time (sigh).
But well written chapter!
So far this story has been great, but has had more than a few spelling errors and just a few usage errors. I'm quite intrigued as to what will happen to Harry when he arrives at the MoM. I'm kind of confused about Molly actually being able to see Harry, almost as if Harry, Molly and Voldemort were all connected...
I think a 3 week punishment of being stuck in a dungeon bedroom, only allowed to leave for meals and class is too much and bordering on jail like. I know Severus can be stern, but in this story he barely shows his stern side, so it's odd for him to all of a sudden issue an extensive punishment like that when before he allowed Harry to get away with more than enough cheek, amongst other things.
Great story, you are a good writer, but I think you may want to proof read one more time before submitting because of the grammar issues.
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