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Reviews For Flicker of a Smile
magic2me@rogersdotcom
I thought you did a good job with this short vignette. It was nice to see Harry handle the situation just by showing initiative rather than incredible healing magic. A beta could clear up a few errors which seem more important because this is so short. I also appreciate it if the terms of the challenge being address are put in the Author's Notes since I often don't remember the specifics of the more obscure challenges. Author's Response: Thanks! i'll look into getting a beta, thanks for reading!
Author's Response: thanks Spiorad! now that im getting fired up about it i will probably write some more of these! Thanks for reading my story!
great great great great great great great great greAT
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