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Reviews For Flicker of a Smile
Title: Flicker of a Smile 16 Apr 2011 6:36 pm
Reviewer: Wendy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really loved this fic! :D I loved how Harry took charge of the situation and took care of Snape, and while it was kind of OOC to have Snape thank him, I really liked that, too! =)
Title: Flicker of a Smile 19 Nov 2008 6:08 am
Reviewer: Sheri Clark (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i'm confused, why would snape say thank you?
    magic2me@rogersdotcom
Title: Flicker of a Smile 24 Jun 2008 6:40 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    He. I liked this. The small give aways be Snape were good. It was weird to see him as a teacher with an uncontrollable class for once!
Title: Flicker of a Smile 13 Jun 2007 3:16 am
Reviewer: HI (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good story!
Title: Flicker of a Smile 10 Sep 2006 2:18 am
Reviewer: Rezallia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    well, I thought it was a little bit vague.  There was action, but there wasn't enough emotion in it to entice me, I think.  It was written decently, but I wasn't really amazed.  However, keep writing.  I think you have potential despite all of the blathering I just precipitated upon you.  Sorry for that.
Title: Flicker of a Smile 19 Aug 2006 5:21 am
Reviewer: jed (Anonymous) [Report This]
    it was the most awesome stoy ive ever heard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Flicker of a Smile 10 Jul 2006 9:37 pm
Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    update soon
Title: Flicker of a Smile 08 Jul 2006 7:54 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]

    I thought you did a good job with this short vignette.  It was nice to see Harry handle the situation just by showing initiative rather than incredible healing magic.  A beta could clear up a few errors which seem more important because this is so short.

    I also appreciate it if the terms of the challenge being address are put in the Author's Notes since I often don't remember the specifics of the more obscure challenges.



    Author's Response: Thanks! i'll look into getting a beta, thanks for reading!
Title: Flicker of a Smile 08 Jul 2006 4:49 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting. Good job! The intereaction was very well done and the ending was very believable. Are you going to write any more fics on here?

    Author's Response: thanks Spiorad! now that im getting fired up about it i will probably write some more of these! Thanks for reading my story!
Title: Flicker of a Smile 08 Jul 2006 1:57 am
Reviewer: Kaira Dmitri (Signed) [Report This]

    great great great great great great great great greAT


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