| Title: Did I hear correctly?
| 09 Jul 2006 3:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Elizza (Anonymous)
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I enjoyed raading this one, but I would like to see a few more chapters. It would be a pity to leave it at this point when you have such a good first chapter. It does give you a chance to explore a better understanding between the main characters. (And maybe you can get someone to explain to Molly that she puts people in danger with her howlers and her screaming with no regard to who is listening. It has always annoyed me that she is constantly forgiven, and sometimes seemingly praised, for her appalling and thoughtless behaviour.)
I like this. It's very believable, and I like how you have Harry's thought process.
Ah, yes, the way I wish Harry had reacted. Well, he still has one more book to come to his senses in Canon. ;-)
Author's Response: Hm, I am not so sure Harry will respond like this in Canon. however, I may write another part for this story! (very much MAYBE)
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