Hmm...Severus definitely does seem to both like & care for his little brother. Although I do think that how he behaves towards Silas
when in company of others to when they are alone seems to confuse the poor lad.
I do think that Severus might have underestimated just how much social and emotional damage the neglect (child abuse) has actually done to Silas. Which is why it may take Silas a very long time to truly
believe that Severus will never hurt him or send him away!
| Title: The School
| 06 Feb 2008 4:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Lollipop (Anonymous)
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"Could you please walk normal?" Severus asked flatly,
I thought Severus was always badgering Silas about his grammar? It's a bit weird of him to be so lax himself. This line had me shouting "NormalLY, Severus" at the screen.
Whoo! Yeah for Hogwarts! I really enjoyed reading about the train ride and then about Silas' first day at Hogwarts . i'm glad that he likes Dumbledore but I'm even more glad that the fatehr of the little boy is the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher. Cool! I like the little boy and hope to read more about him. The meeting with the ghosts was cool. I'm glad that Severus reassured his brother that he would never send him away. Nice chapter! you should go back and fix some typos though, there were quite a few throughout.
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought I got most of the errors, but I was sick when I posted, so . . . yeah. Thanks again
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