An interesting twist on the relationship between Harry and Snape. I really appreciate the way you've managed to show Snape softening towards Harry (or Silas, rather) while still staying true to his character, and allowing the change to proceed gradually.
| Title: The New
| 04 Jul 2007 7:19 am
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| Reviewer: Leanne (Anonymous)
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You have kept Snape in character without immediately changing his personality which i find makes the story that much more enjoyable.I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Wonderful chapter! I like Severus worrying about Ha- Silas's sleepwalking and about Sirius taking him away. It's adorable!
I may be wrong in this... but this part --"Silas has been asking several times a day . . . there has been problems lately.-- Shouldn't 'has' be 'have'? since problems is plural?
Author's Response: I think you're right, actually. I need to go over this chapter again anyway soon. Thanks for the review!
Excellent chapter! I really enjoyed the part where Draco and Silas were playing in the mud. Actually, I love how you've characterized both boys, and I enjoy reading about their adventures ;) Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy your story!
~Jade
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