Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Nice, can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Title: The Wish
| 20 Jan 2007 2:33 am
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| Reviewer: jo (Anonymous)
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fantastic story loved it hope u continue soon
| Title: The Wish
| 29 Dec 2006 1:00 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Nice update. Harry is still powerful, isn't he. How come no one has seen his scar? Something like that is hard to miss. I think your Severus is very thoughtful for an older bachelor raising a younger brother.
This was excellent! Awww I loved the dream/fantasy part where he was a little kid. XD
A lovely story. I can't wait for more.
| Title: The Discovery
| 20 Nov 2006 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous)
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I think you are brilliant. Loved it-every bit. Confused a bit as to how William will fit in it all. Please updat soon. Thanks
| Title: The Discovery
| 19 Nov 2006 6:28 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Severus is turning out to be not so bad as a brother. How will he react to Harry's sorting? Then again, I can't help but think Slytherin or Ravenclaw either.
Good chapter. Like Harry thinking the basilisk was just a big snake!
Whoo! Yeah for Hogwarts! I really enjoyed reading about the train ride and then about Silas' first day at Hogwarts . i'm glad that he likes Dumbledore but I'm even more glad that the fatehr of the little boy is the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher. Cool! I like the little boy and hope to read more about him. The meeting with the ghosts was cool. I'm glad that Severus reassured his brother that he would never send him away. Nice chapter! you should go back and fix some typos though, there were quite a few throughout.
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought I got most of the errors, but I was sick when I posted, so . . . yeah. Thanks again
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