| Title: The Friends
| 20 Jul 2006 9:03 am
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| Reviewer: violet (Anonymous)
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very interesting story, i look forward to seeing where you go with this. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks!
| Title: The Friends
| 16 Jul 2006 1:30 am
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| Reviewer: Flamegirl (Anonymous)
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uh oh. that doesn't sound good. i hope severus isn't too hard on him.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
This is an interesting take on the Guardian!Snape genre. I'm curious to read more. One note though - you've switched back and forth between "Silias" and "Silas" -while I assume that you mean the latter, the former is shows up more often.
I look forward to seeing the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I meant Silas. I'm going to change that right away . . .
Good beginning, I think that this is a nice original idea, and well-written so far ... I hope that you will write more soon so that we can see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
| Title: The Brothers
| 12 Jul 2006 6:58 am
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| Reviewer: Charley (Anonymous)
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Oh Wow...This story is great. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
| Title: The Brothers
| 11 Jul 2006 4:40 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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This is moving quickly. Snape seems to be taking this in stride better than I would expect. Also, from the way Lucius is talking, I guess the Dark Lord is not in the picture. Hope you continue!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Nope, no Dark Lord . . . yet. Snape, well, is Snape. Next chapter, I'll have a little more focus on him.
| Title: The Brothers
| 10 Jul 2006 11:39 pm
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| Reviewer: musicsteph (Anonymous)
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Good story with a nice twist making them brothers!-- I am ready for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm currently writing the next chapter
Very good so far! I really hope that you will continue to update this soon! I like the idea of Severus and Harry being brothers-very original! Great idea! Thanks for taking the time to write this!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Don't worry, I'm already working on the next chapter!
Absolutely brilliant! This is a great and newly creative (at least to me) idea of an interaction between snape and harry. I have never ready one like this so i am excited to see where you will go with it. Great job and cannot wait for more :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
This is quite good so far. Nice twist on the Harry/Severus relationship. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
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