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Good start I just thought I would point out that the first paragraph repeats. this is interesting I look forward to seeing what your going to do. Update soon!
Ohhhh.... this this very good! I always love something a bit different! You've got me eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Do you think this will turn into a mentoring fiction? Please update soon! Saphire Starlet
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