| Title: East Cliff
| 11 Aug 2008 7:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous)
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I love these last two chapters and they were long overdue. I love this story. Its a great deaging story for Harry and I like how you kept the baby Harry in character, clinging to Snape and still trying to be a big boy. The going in the bushes thing was totally hilarious! Those of us with younger siblings will know that they always absolutely NEED to go at the most inopportune moments!
What did Snape figure out? Dont keep us hanging!
huh! waiting to see what snape's big breakthru is!
snape doesn't seem to be warming to harry appreciably over the last few chapters... i am almost giving up on him :(
I'm so happy to see this updated, love Snape inlocoperentis (spelling?) I don't know Whitby but live in Poole just up the road from Bournemouth and the whole seaside thing was very true to me. Hope another chapter will be soon, looking forward to seeing what breakthrough Snape has made.
Whoops, missed this chapter!
Anyway; this chapter was rather interesting. The past event Snape was musing on was really creative and horrible at the same time. I liked the light-heartedness at the end, little Harry keeps me laughing!
Nice story really enjoying all the characters cant wait to see what is next
Weeheee!! I love it. I wonder what Snape needs to go to the Burrow for.
I loved their seaside adventure. Harry was so adorable, as usual. I loved how SNape tricked him into going up all the steps. Tehe! And how he took a nap in his pushcart.
You have Snape down perfectly... remembering his dark days as having feelings he still wanted. Wow. That is so true. Fantastic job.
You know...I can't remember if I've ever reviewed this story (I may have just lurked around, gobbling up every word) but I love it. And I adore the way you write Harry as a toddler. It's so realistic. Snape isn't overly sweet or coddling. He provides just enough care and comfort for Harry to be sufficient as a guardian. But he provides the sort of stability that Harry needs--consistency, firmness... He picks Harry up a lot and holds his hand without dragging him around, and I love that. Snape isn't perfect, but Harry will turn out to be much more well-rounded as an individual for having him as a parent. As much as I love Sirius, Harry would turn out to be a spoiled brat if he were brought up by his godfather in this story.
Overall, this is a brilliant story--one of the best de-aging fics I've read. Thanks for the update, and good luck with your writing in the future :-)
| Title: East Cliff
| 07 Aug 2008 6:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Eureka!!! He sees the light! (Literally)
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