Uh-oh! This looks like it's going to be good!
-P.G.
AGH! You can't leave me like this!!!
Wow, you're a good storyteller.
Coldy!!! *hysterically giggles*
‘Snape,’ he said clearly.
A thin eyebrow arched on Snape’s pallid face.
‘Snape, Snape, Snape, Snape …’
‘Alright Potter, I heard you the first time,’ Snape said scathingly.
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This bit made me nearly hyperventilate from laughter.
This chapter amused me immensely.
Title: The Pickles Curse
| 11 May 2009 5:49 am
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Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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wow. loved it. can't wait for the next chapter.
You are doing a wonderful job describing the toddlers mind. I'm a bit worried about Severus and Sirius. You've got my mind working overtime with what Albus said..Hmmmmm I REALLY want to know what this "common" thread is!
Draco and Hermione working together... Yea...I'm a fan!
Title: The Pickles Curse
| 14 Sep 2008 11:24 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Nice and mystic, I like the story. Little-sun
wow that was a well constructed story please im beggin u 2 complete this would be a waste of a great mind if you didnt
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