I'm so happy to see this updated, love Snape inlocoperentis (spelling?) I don't know Whitby but live in Poole just up the road from Bournemouth and the whole seaside thing was very true to me. Hope another chapter will be soon, looking forward to seeing what breakthrough Snape has made.
Whoops, missed this chapter!
Anyway; this chapter was rather interesting. The past event Snape was musing on was really creative and horrible at the same time. I liked the light-heartedness at the end, little Harry keeps me laughing!
Poor Snape, this day just isn't turning out how he expected ;p Harry cracks me up, he's got a small attention span and climbs all over the place. He's so adorable, but he annoys the heck out of Snape lol.
I'm still wondering about what is up with Lucius. Hopefully Hermione can get some answers and solve this mystery.
Hope to read more soon!
Nice story really enjoying all the characters cant wait to see what is next
Weeheee!! I love it. I wonder what Snape needs to go to the Burrow for.
I loved their seaside adventure. Harry was so adorable, as usual. I loved how SNape tricked him into going up all the steps. Tehe! And how he took a nap in his pushcart.
You have Snape down perfectly... remembering his dark days as having feelings he still wanted. Wow. That is so true. Fantastic job.
| Title: A Trip to the Seaside
| 07 Aug 2008 11:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Muah ahaha! So cute! Harry is so fickle. I love it. Great story and thanks for the update!!
You know...I can't remember if I've ever reviewed this story (I may have just lurked around, gobbling up every word) but I love it. And I adore the way you write Harry as a toddler. It's so realistic. Snape isn't overly sweet or coddling. He provides just enough care and comfort for Harry to be sufficient as a guardian. But he provides the sort of stability that Harry needs--consistency, firmness... He picks Harry up a lot and holds his hand without dragging him around, and I love that. Snape isn't perfect, but Harry will turn out to be much more well-rounded as an individual for having him as a parent. As much as I love Sirius, Harry would turn out to be a spoiled brat if he were brought up by his godfather in this story.
Overall, this is a brilliant story--one of the best de-aging fics I've read. Thanks for the update, and good luck with your writing in the future :-)
| Title: East Cliff
| 07 Aug 2008 6:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Eureka!!! He sees the light! (Literally)
very interesting this was, what was the reassoning for snape dragging harry up 199 steps, then going back them roughly two hours later, was it just to reminiss about being a death eater or was something else going on?
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