I read your whole story last night. I find it very interesting how you change perspectives throughout. It suits your style and it isn't confusing the way you have done so. Snape is very Snape like - yet unSnape like. Just the way I like him. : ). You have clearly thought out your character version of Harry. You've kept a clear consistent characterisation throughout. And I hope to read more soon. : )
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very flattered and glad you made these comments... It makes me confident I'm living up to my own expectations.
Smiles!
Lily