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Reviews For Eight
I like how you've given Snape habits that he doesn't really know about. It seems like he's almost an alcoholic, since he thinks about drinking every time something bad happens. I'm glad he can control it for Harry's sake. -P.G.
Keep writing, Snarky B. Author's Response: Just a note: I am quite capable of writing run of the mill syntax and grammar. This story flows with the characters. One thing most like about it is the unique writing style I have employed. I realize I have sentence fragments; try cataloging speech for a conversation and see how many times you or your conversation partner speak in complete sentences. (Hint: It won't be that many.) Inner thoughts are even more random; at least in those suffering from PTSD, like Harry. I may, for kicks, post one chapter right here all in one POV with 'normal' syntax and see how many like it better... Anyway, Snarky, thank you for the feedback. However, if my story is that confusing and poorly written, you may want to stop reading it.
Cheers! Lily
Author's Response: You must have ESP...oh, did I just give something away? ;>
Sadistic Bitch. Doing that to a tiny child...
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