*Grins* arh this story so soppy but good soppy, would definitely like to read more! Your really good with people's pschye's, you capture the mind of an eight year old very well, i particular liked the part where Harry sent Dumble's flying on his arse, twas very funny to read.
Yay! You finally updated. I read this story a long time ago on FF.net and was hoping someday you would continue with it since I thought it was wonderful. I really like your POV and your Harry is so sweet and so sad at the same time and your Severus is great. Please continue writing. This is a beautiful story! And if you ever have time I would be honored if you would read one of mine, I have several posted here.
Thanks for updating. I thought you gave up this story. I love this chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens at harry's birthday party. please update soon.
bloody brilliant. Update soon!!
| Title: Chapter Eighteen
| 13 Jan 2008 10:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Slytherin_mafia (dixierebelgurl@hotmail.com) (Anonymous)
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What? *searches page* There's no more? Sniff sniff.....Great story hun! I love how you didn't immediatly drop Snape into the caring Guardian that so many people try to do when they write these fics, you actually caught the snarky surly character of our favorite Potions Master, and showed how the relationship is steadily changing and morphing into something healthy for both of them. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter Eighteen
| 04 Jan 2008 6:08 am
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| Reviewer: Ramos (Anonymous)
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I've been reading this story all along, and although I do like it quite a bit, I have one quibble. The narration from Harry's first person POV uses language and a vocabulary vastly beyond his age. I realize he's rather clever, and reads well, but there are certain phrases that are just far too poetic for a child his age. That makes it hard to keep in mind his relative age and experience.
| Title: Chapter Eighteen
| 29 Nov 2007 4:14 am
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| Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Anonymous)
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Great story. I love Harry, he's abused but is slowly getting used to being around Severus. I thought that his accidental magic against William was great. I really want to see if Severus will return to teach at Hogwarts or if he just might home school Harry instead. Will we be seeing more of Poppy?
| Title: Chapter Eighteen
| 27 Nov 2007 12:33 am
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| Reviewer: Myrrdin (Anonymous)
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Evil William! *takes a switch to the little brat* Bet that was a sight to see him fly backwards on his arse like Albus. *giggle*
Wonderful story so far, dear. I can't wait until you update! ^_^ *faves*
Great story!! I love the plot, and both Harry and Snape are so believable!! It's such a sweet story...
Keep writing, please!!! =D
No! You MUST update! Please, please, please post another chapter soon! I love this story, it's so entertaining. It's also very amusing and sweet, I just love everything about it. Harry is so sweet and cute and Snape is just amusing and wonderful to little Harry. I love this story, please post another chapter soon.
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