Interesting story you've created, here! I started reading just a little while...ok, not such a little while...ago and couldn't stop! It's really a nice new spin you've taken on the Snape taking in young Harry. I really like it! You've done a pretty good job of keeping everyone in character, but I realize it's probably not high on your list of things to do-and that's ok, because your story is better with the changes you've made to. So, I guess I'm trying to say that your characters are really believable in the situations you present them with. I was a tad worried what would happen to Harry in the first few chapters when Snape constantly neglected and refused to be concerned with him. But, all is well in Spinner's End and there's even some other magic-knowing folk around! I'm still unsure what Severus is going to do about Harry during the school term but can't wait to see what you come up with! So, update soon!! Also, are you planning on writing subsequent stories for each year until Harry attends Hogwarts or is this just a summer story? Because, if you can continue to create plot lines as you have so far, you should definatly write them down and post it here so we can read them too!! UPDATE!! *please*
| Title: Chapter Eighteen
| 15 Nov 2007 7:39 am
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| Reviewer: Haarriverse (Anonymous)
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What a terriffic story!!! Snape has an aly, the neighbor understands about wizards, and all is right in the world. One question? Did all that head banging result in head damage? The voices in Harry's head are awefully well developed and I'm worried there might be trouble ahead.
Snape is getting very good at reassuring Harry. Moreover, Harry is becoming more secure with Snape. It's a pleasure to watch.
love this story, hope you update soon
I have fallen in love with this story! Please add more soon!! You are bringing both Harry and Severus along believably true to character. Wonderful story!!
This is awesome so far!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter Seventeen
| 05 Aug 2007 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: Keina (Anonymous)
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This story is my favourite so far- and I might have read hundred of them by now !
Your writting is awesome and the story is just sooo great ! I totally love it, I can't wait to read the next chapter ! Please don't stop ! Thanks a lot for sharing with us !
Love love love!!!! I'm so happy there is a new chapter!
This story always makes my chest feel all achy and stuff... amazing how some stories can produce enough emotion to get a physical response like that.
Ooh, I wonder what's going on?
Really great story, I couldn't stop reading until I finished what you have so far!
It would serve them right if Harry Potter never went to Hogwarts. :-)
Evil Dumbledore... don't you just want to kick him?
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