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Title: Chapter Eleven 20 Dec 2006 5:33 am
Reviewer: Ramos (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story, but I have to warn you to keep Harry's observations in his age bracket.  The descriptive language you used was beautiful, but I doubt that he would be able to come up with "blushing, currant-veined flames" until he was much older.  Severus might think that, and it would have been an interesting comparison to have Harry consider the sky colored like the raspberry jam he was never allowed.

    Author's Response:

    I like the idea about raspberry jam.  I know Harry's voice is way, way too mature.  I've tempered that observation in 2 ways.  One - Harry's only escape was to read, you notice that in the early chapters, so his vocabulary would be higher than normal.  Also, abused children are infinitely imaginative; I know that from experience.  And, yes, even given that the vocab is too high.  But I like it that way, and so does Harry. ;)

     

    Lily 

Title: Chapter Ten 27 Nov 2006 11:37 am
Reviewer: CheddarTrek (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story, very well written and all that.  Severus seems a bit out of character, but I'm willing to accept that for a great story such as this.  Please keep up the brilliant work.
Title: Chapter Ten 24 Nov 2006 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! Keep going only write faster please.  Thanks
Title: Chapter One 05 Nov 2006 9:30 am
Reviewer: Spuddy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter!!! i love the way snape stays mostly  in character while he trys to deal with harry!!! keep up the good work!!!
Title: Chapter One 05 Oct 2006 3:26 am
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Signed) [Report This]
    I read your whole story last night. I find it very interesting how you change perspectives throughout. It suits your style and it isn't confusing the way you have done so. Snape is very Snape like - yet unSnape like. Just the way I like him. : ). You have clearly thought out your character version of Harry. You've kept a clear consistent characterisation throughout. And I hope to read more soon. : )

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm very flattered and glad you made these comments... It makes me confident I'm living up to my own expectations. 

     

    Smiles!

    Lily 

Title: Chapter Nine 02 Oct 2006 12:22 pm
Reviewer: Visitor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    aww, poor Harry, mean Dumbledore's trying to worm his way out of it. Snape is having such a hard time!
Title: Chapter One 29 Sep 2006 5:09 am
Reviewer: Alexandra (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wonderful fic. I can't wait to read more.

Title: Chapter Nine 28 Sep 2006 3:25 am
Reviewer: Kathy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    A well used theme but done fairly well. The only suggestion I have would be that Snape switches back and forth too quickly.

Title: Chapter Nine 26 Sep 2006 11:55 pm
Reviewer: seri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good chapter, cant wait for it all to be resolved.
Title: Chapter Nine 22 Sep 2006 2:21 am
Reviewer: Ginny Lynn Lestrange (Signed) [Report This]
    Upon studying your apologue in it's entirety...my intimation is that of utter accolade! I found it to be spiritedly written. Your creation delivering us into the deepest depths of litarary bliss. I fastidiously await the next unquestionably  phantasmagorical  passage!  Kudos my dear on a veritably bewitching saga!  

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