Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter Twelve 25 Jan 2009 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Sometimes I get a bit confused when you change scenes. I think it would be better if you separated them more often with the dots that you used earlier in the story.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Eleven 25 Jan 2009 6:03 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...is this a dream, or is Snape just going to rub his back to prove that he won't beat him?

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Ten 25 Jan 2009 5:57 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for Snape being nice. I'm surprised he hasn't been pushed beyond his limits yet. I wonder if he'll be able to hold his temper or if he'll lose it again.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Nine 25 Jan 2009 5:46 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Couldn't breathe well enough to cry? Poor thing. I really like this story--good work! You've really played with my emotions.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Twenty 25 Jan 2009 1:47 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!!!! So sweet! I love how close they are getting but how human they are still, like Snape losing his temper. Flying was so cute!
Title: Chapter Twenty 25 Jan 2009 1:40 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. It's always such a wonderful surprise to see your story updated. I hope you will be continuing soon.
Title: Chapter Eight 25 Jan 2009 11:38 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh...
Title: Chapter Seven 25 Jan 2009 11:10 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That was sad. Poor little guy...at least Snape was very understanding.
Title: Chapter Six 25 Jan 2009 11:03 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank goodness Snape got rid of the liquor--that was the worst moment of this, so far. I really hated when he was drunk because Harry didn't need to witness that.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Five 25 Jan 2009 10:54 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that's so sad.

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