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Reviews For Emrys Snape
I will use this as an example to explain why some people might feel that your portrayal of Snape is out of character. Severus Snape may, in fact, be of the social class that would drive an SUV in Europe nowadays (though I admittely rather doubt SUVs even were fashionable in the UK back then) but, and that is the problem with this, he is highly intelligent and, at other times, gives the impression of not wanting people to notice his working class muggle origins. It seems highly unlikely that he would even own something as muggle as a car at all, yet even more unlikely that he would purchase one that announces to all and sundry that he comes from working class origins, feels inferior because of that and has purchased an unnecessarily large car to bolster his self-esteem. I acknowledge that you might have written this story back when little was known about Snape's origins and general character ... yet I would still advise any aspiring author to go for the more neutral "car" unless they wish to make a deliberate statement with the type of car.
Author's Response: Neville will basicly grow up around the boys and Severus but i have not decided if Severus will adopt the child or not
Special like where Draco and Harry will grow up together. I was a little surprised that Snape did not take Neville too, but I suppose 3 baby boys would be a bit much. Great story. Author's Response: Glad you liked it , Don't worry Neville will be spending lots of time with Draco and Emrys i don't think that Severus would be able to handle three boys even with Remus there to help them
Author's Response: Emrys is almost 16 months old when voldemort kills his parents and I have seen in alot of stories with Baby Harry in them that they have Wizarding children learn to speak faster than muggle children |
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