I have really enjoyed this story so far and await any updates
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it , I am almost finished typing chapter 4 so hopefully i will be able to post it
| Title: Chapter 3
| 17 Mar 2008 9:58 pm
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| Reviewer: loves2read (Anonymous)
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I am really enjoying this story. Can't wait to read more!!
what a cute chapter, going shopping with severus would be a amusing experience as he has no idea about shopping, i hope remus is going to be fine about the arrangements, can't wait to read more
Interesting story, can't wait for more!
this story is great and isn't severus so sweet in this, i hope he does adopt harry without dumbledore knowing.
Awww I love it. You better continue! XD
| Title: Chapter 2
| 19 Feb 2007 10:48 pm
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| Reviewer: eazy_two.remember (Anonymous)
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it's really good so far...there are only a few things that i noticed. a few grammar errors and you had the number 4 in the middle of a word...this chapter or last. but beside that, it's looking to be really great. keep it up. (ps. when's the next update??) great job!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 21 Jan 2007 10:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna Evans (Anonymous)
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Please update this story! I really like it!
*Anna*
| Title: Chapter 2
| 23 Oct 2006 6:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous)
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This is too rich. Keep it going. Thanks
| Title: Chapter 2
| 10 Oct 2006 5:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Visitor (Anonymous)
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Omg... this is such a funny story... poor Sev he doesn't even know how to be a parent....
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