| Title: Chapter 1
| 02 Sep 2006 10:46 am
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| Reviewer: Sakya (Anonymous)
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Good start. How will Snape adopt Emrys without Dumbledore knowing?
| Title: Chapter 1
| 01 Sep 2006 3:47 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Not a bad start. Interesting and different. Your writing is good, but it desperately needs someone to beta it. There's so many punctuation errors that it's distracting.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 31 Aug 2006 8:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Visitor (Anonymous)
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Aw, what a cute story! I really like it! Hope you will continue it! I love Baby Harry Fics with Snape as caretaker!
Wow, Snape in a SUV. Did not see that coming. I like where this is going. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing . I'm almost done with Chap. 2 so it will be sometime soon if i dont get distracted from it .
Aw, sad! I'll keep reading to see what happens next.
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