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Reviews For A Potions Accident
You have done a great job with the story and more importantly kept Sanpe in character. With the next chapter, what if all but Harry turned back the next day. Maybe because of his malnourishment he doesn't turn back. Or maybe he doesn't want to. In that way you can focus on a few relationships. You could maybe make it two children, Harry and Draco.
You have done a great job with the story and more importantly kept Sanpe in character. With the next chapter, what if all but Harry turned back the next day. Maybe because of his malnourishment he doesn't turn back. Or maybe he doesn't want to. In that way you can focus on a few relationships. You could maybe make it two children, Harry and Draco.
You have done a great job with the story and more importantly kept Sanpe in character. With the next chapter, what if all but Harry turned back the next day. Maybe because of his malnourishment he doesn't turn back. Or maybe he doesn't want to. In that way you can focus on a few relationships. You could maybe make it two children, Harry and Draco.
You have done a great job with the story and more importantly kept Sanpe in character. With the next chapter, what if all but Harry turned back the next day. Maybe because of his malnourishment he doesn't turn back. Or maybe he doesn't want to. In that way you can focus on a few relationships. You could maybe make it two children, Harry and Draco.
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