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Title: A Potions Accident 16 Sep 2006 3:59 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Are you kidding????? 

    More!  What a wonderful concept!  It may be hard to do 15 toddlers, but you could pick a few.  Or you could call in more adults.  What about the Order?  I'd love to see Mad-Eye taking an interest in Crabbe and Goyle.  How about the twins thinking Pansy is a little princess?  How about Poppy falling in love with Longbottom?  What if Draco, who needs to be loved, attaches himself to Harry?  How about if the Dark Lord also got turned into a toddler and Lucius and Bellatrix are trying to deal with him?  What if Snape learns to be human by getting all the love from the babies he never got from his family?  OOOOoooo the possibilities!

Title: A Potions Accident 16 Sep 2006 2:57 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another wonderful story from you. Enjoyed this first chapter very much. I vote for them to stay as toddlers a while longer.
Title: A Potions Accident 16 Sep 2006 1:06 am
Reviewer: Dragon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think it would be more fun to see Snape deal with the toddlers for a little longer... or what if they age slowly and not quickly like he thought they would?
Title: A Potions Accident 15 Sep 2006 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Alissa (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I think you should keep them toddlers for a while, it's a good way for Harry and Snape to form a relationship.  Great Story. 

Title: A Potions Accident 15 Sep 2006 11:26 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely, lovely, lovely. XD Fantastic as always and another baby story from you? Fantastic! Poor little Harry. I really like how little Draco is following Snape and demanding so much attention. I love the Snape and Harry interaction, so sweet. I liked the scene when Harry had the dinner/spaghetti in his fist and then looked sad when Snape vanished it- poor boy. Great job! And Hermione is just adorable! "Bath, teeth, bed.." yup that's Hermione! Good job on remembering that her parents are dentists. XD Loved it!


    Author's Response: Yes another baby fic from me lol. I really couldn't help it, I loved the baby part of my other fic. And I think it will help me to write my other fic as well. I can have some fun, bubbly moments with my toddlers and then I can be more serious with my other fic.
Title: A Potions Accident 15 Sep 2006 11:23 pm
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This part of the story is wonderful. to see Snape like this with younger children is great. I would hope to see them stay younger for a while longer, and then see the reactions of them when they return to there actual age. This short part allows Snape to see Harry for how he was treated by the Dursleys, and I for one think it is very cute. I hope you continue with another part.
Title: A Potions Accident 15 Sep 2006 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wouldn't mind if it continued.  I think it was hilarious with Snape and everyone dealing with so many toddlers!
Title: A Potions Accident 15 Sep 2006 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]

    awww! that's so cute!

    no, don't stop yet! a few more days! at least until ALL four adults realize what's wrong with Harry. Maybe they can grow up a bit more slowly? like, the next day they're still two, the day after they're four or five and so on until after a week they are back to normal?

Title: A Potions Accident 15 Sep 2006 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Tabbi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I definitly think you need to continue the story with then as toddlers! I would love to see a relationship between little Harry and Severus develop from this. Please continue!
Title: A Potions Accident 15 Sep 2006 9:32 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh you just have to continue!  How dare you think otherwise.  Silly author you!  hehe. (I'm sick so I can be as silly as I want or well in my mind)  Anyway wonderful first chapter.  However I so want to see more. :D I just love all your stories. and your grammer is so smooth. yay!

    Author's Response: My smooth grammer is thanks to Sunset hill, but I'm really glad you like my story.

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