| Title: Nursery School, Part 2
| 19 Sep 2007 8:27 am
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| Reviewer: jEN77 (Anonymous)
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i NOTICED AFTER READING THIS FOR THE SECOND TIME THAT DRACO HAS NOT ONCE ASKED FOR MUMMY OR DADDY. i GET THE IMPRESSION THAT HE HAS POSSIBLY/LIKELY BEEN ABUSED OR NEGLECTED ALSO. wITH A FATHER LIKE LUCIUS, I CAN'T IMAGINE HIM BEING TOO PATIENT. aLSO HE IS CONCERNED ABOUT FOOD BEING TAKEN OR A SMACKING. i WONDER HOW NARCISSA WAS TO HER SON.
| Title: Nursery School, Part 2
| 17 Sep 2007 9:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous)
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You updated!!!
It was so great to see a new chapter up this morning. I was so sure you had abandoned this story, which was sad, as I consider it to be the best de-aged fic I've read. I like how you write all of the Hogwarts students, not just Harry. And Harry and Draco are so cute together. It's nice to see them be friends.
Another thing I liked was how Harry started to adjust to Lupin. I felt sort of bad when he kept calling for Snape around him. After all, Lupin cares about him so much and only wants him to be safe and happy.
Thank you so much for not abandoning this story! I hope to see another chapter soon, but take as long as you need. It's well worth the wait. =)
| Title: Nursery School, Part 2
| 17 Sep 2007 11:13 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I love it! they are so cute! I love how Remus took Harry out, and showed him his photo album. For some reason, Remus' thoughts on Harry being a private individual really stood out for me. I liked the bubbles, and the children's actions and descriptions were just fun! Great story! I'm so glad that you updated!
| Title: Nursery School, Part 2
| 17 Sep 2007 3:08 am
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| Reviewer: little stacy (Anonymous)
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this is the cutest deaging story I've read yet!! Nice work, looking forward to reading more.
Cute!
I wonder if Dumbledore really will be blind/stupid enough to not take the abuse accusations seriously. Poor Snape might have to adopt Harry after all, and I'm not sure Harry will be very thrilled with that once he is returned to normal age.
Oh man, this has a few of my favorite lines ever:
“You two are going to be really embarrassed when you re-age,” Severus pointed out.
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For the next hour, Severus got to listen to Harry as he showed the photos off to Draco. At least Harry was smart enough to not bring the blasted photos to show him. Or...
“Look, Sev’vus,” Harry said, pulling on his robe sleeve, “dat’s baby Harry. An –”
Severus groaned.
I seriously love your story so much. It is by far the best de-aging story out there. Bar-none. I really do hope you find the time and drive to write another chapter before TOO long :) They make me laugh and feel all happy.
Great job!
Keira
This is just so cute. I felt really sorry for the boys at nursery school they booth were so sad.
| Title: Nursery School, Part 2
| 06 Sep 2007 1:55 am
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| Reviewer: Loxodontamagica (Anonymous)
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Loved the chapter! Very realistic toddler behavior...poor Harry...I hope that Draco and Harry will still be friends when they 'grow up'. I loved Sev's determination that Harry would not go to the Dursleys, although the mention of the possibility worries me! What plots are you about to spring on us?
@nnie
| Title: Nursery School, Part 2
| 06 Sep 2007 1:35 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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AAAhhhhh!!!! That was so cute. Your apt descriptions of the children painted a vivid picture in my mind. Snape and Remus were great in their care of the children along with all the others. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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