Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Prologue 11 Apr 2022 8:03 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m hooked.
Title: Prologue 07 Apr 2014 10:21 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ok, I will try hard to review each chapter. This is starting off well, Dudley isn't bad which is fine. Petunia is believable mean and inconsistent to be nicer but still abusive. So far the only thing surprising is to think Snape wouldn't send the homework - doesn't seem like his character but have to see.
Title: Prologue 02 Apr 2014 7:19 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant first chapter. I'm glad I have found this fic.

    Author's Response:

    The sequel, Geas of Gryffindor, is available on ff-dot-net.  As it wasn't a story with Snape and Harry as the main characters, I wasn't sure it was appropriate to post here. 

     

    Thanks for all your reviews, and I hope you'll join me as I post future fic!

     

    -K

Title: Prologue 03 Nov 2013 6:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic start thank you
Title: Prologue 29 Jul 2011 2:41 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't know why I hadn't found your story before now, but I'm glad I did. This first chapter is so well-written. I really like how you get into HArry's head. I did find one quibble. HArry's birthday is July 31st so he'd have four weeks till the beginning of classes, not one. Not to worry though. That didn't interrupt my immersion in the tale nor my enjoyment. On to Chapter Two!

    Author's Response:

    Now that I've reached the end of all of your reviews, let me say that it's awesome to see someone who comments on every chapter s/he reads.  I really appreciate getting feedback on each bit; it helps me become a better writer (even though this story is admittedly pretty ancient as far as that goes.)  I hope you'll continue to review, and read the sequel on ff-dot-net when you're through!

    -K

Title: Prologue 04 Sep 2009 10:23 am
Reviewer: megan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you are a really awesome writer. i've only read the first chapter but i really like it. thanks!!!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'm glad you like it so far.  :)

    -K

Title: Prologue 09 Apr 2008 2:11 am
Reviewer: oodlesofmzness (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!
Title: Prologue 03 Nov 2007 2:49 am
Reviewer: jharad17 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the beginning of this story, and don't know why I haven't read it before . . . but I have to wonder, why is there only a week between Harry's borthday and the start of classes? His b-day is the 31st of July, and the Hogwarts Express doesn't take them to school till the 1st of Sept. That's a month, not a week! (And plenty of time to get work done . . .)

    Regardless of that, onward!
Title: Prologue 02 Sep 2007 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Kumari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think the timing is a tad bit confusing. Only a week to go before school, when Harry's birthday arrives?
    Other than that, the story is truly well written, which I'm glad to see. Not everday are good writers found here. Keep up the great writing!
Title: Prologue 12 Oct 2006 3:08 am
Reviewer: Jeanne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like your story so far. Dudley and Harry's new tentative relationship for 'helping' one another is neat and I hope it continues. I love the evil detector, and can't imagine why Snape wouldn't give an assignment. No matter how he feels about the student, I'd think he'd rather see Harry fail on the given assignments and criticize him for work done, then withhold it and complain on what he himself was the cause of. But... since I dont know what is forthcoming I'm just voicing thoughts and wondering. Good pace to the story, I enjoyed it very much and am looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response:

    Sorry for the late response, but I've picked up this story after awhile away.  Dudley will disappear for a bit, but he shows up later on.  You're right about Snape - no matter how he feels at the student, he's going to give them an equal right to do the work he assigns.  And fail it.  ;)

    More is up now!  Thanks for reviewing,

    -K


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