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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: TEN: Cloak and Cauldron 22 Dec 2019 11:08 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Um not to be *that* person but the story feels a bit jumpy now. Like it goes from one thing to another; also, Snape and Harry are a bit ooc. I know it was the potion fumes this chapter but even before this they were seeming so different from the books/movies
Title: TEN: Cloak and Cauldron 07 Apr 2014 11:28 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm, not really understanding why Snape is worried about Harry when his punishment would directly cause the aggravation of whatever possible, potential Obscura Harry might be dealing with?? Just have to keep reading and find out.
Title: TEN: Cloak and Cauldron 22 Feb 2013 12:37 am
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story so far, Draco is just a little odd
Title: TEN: Cloak and Cauldron 29 Jul 2011 6:05 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I still am not sure what's gong on with Harry, in that I don't know what caused the change in his behaviour. The possibilities I have come up with are that the stresses of the past 15 years have finally caught up with him and he has unconsciously bottled everything away in the obscura as a means of self-preservtion, that he has been hexed somehow, that he's been under a heavy-duty enchantment for most of his life and it is failing now, or that Voldemort has done something to him through the scar connection. Probably all of them are incorrect but it doesn't matter as I know you'll explain things in time.

    In the meantime, I just wanted to say that the little scene where Harry was smelling his father's scent on the cloak brought me awfully close to needing to go get a box of tissues. Luckily, Ihad my handkerchief in my pocket. I've known for a long time that scent is one of the most emotive senses (my mum passed away in 1998 and I have a jumper of hers that still smells like her. I hug it when I'm really depressed about things) and I could really identify with Harry right then. It was a lovely piece of writing.

    Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Ah!  Well, you guessed a lot pretty early.  Well done!

    I do like the idea that Harry has been under an enchantment which is only failing now.  (That is the plot to one of my current WIPs.  Shh!)  

    I'm glad the scent thing worked for you.  Funny; I am visiting my sister right now, and when she hugged me she said, "mmmm.  You smell like a [name of our family]."  I thought that was hysterical, but true - whenever I hug my sisters I'm like "yay... family-smell."  :D

    -K

Title: TEN: Cloak and Cauldron 26 Mar 2008 2:58 am
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Honestly, I'm starting to feel like this story might be slash or pre-slash with the way Draco is acting. Not sure if that's your intention or not, but there were some definite vibes in this chapter.

    Author's Response: Let's say I wanted to keep the option open while I was writing the story.  Now that I'm finished, I'd say the story should be classified as pre-slash, or that you're meant to infer that a more physical relationship between the two characters is at least possible.  Now that I'm messing about with the sequel again, I have to decide for certain whether the pair really enters such a relationship or if I'm going to 'flirt' with the idea again...
Title: TEN: Cloak and Cauldron 03 Sep 2007 12:27 am
Reviewer: Kumari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oddly both Snape and Harry seem out of character, but I suppose that is intentional, so it's understood. Hmm, can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Completely.

    -K


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