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Reviews For the Secret of Slytherin
Author's Response: I know this is an ancient review, but I could not help but respond! Grudging, self-disgusted respect indeed!
Good chapter, still waiting to see where Snape is going.
Rae is such a darling girl and I think it did Harry a lot of good to be able to be a "big brother" to her. I really liked it that he passed on Professor Snape's advice about letting her emotions out (now if he will only take that advice himself!). And the additional advice not to cry alone was good, too. I like Yolande. She seems like a very intelligent and level-headed girl. I especially liked her promise to make sure that Harry gets his cloak back from Draco. Speaking of Draco, I am wondering where he is. I have a feling that his Head of House will be having some words with him for missing class. Great job (as usual)! Bravo! Author's Response: Yay! More comments on the OCs! Thank you. :)
-K
v interesting -going to read on now
Harry couldn’t help it – he laughed, startled into amusement. “You said it was an antidote for most poisons – I haven’t forgotten, or anything.” ... It was Draught of the Living Death, not an antidote to most poisons, that was the bezoar, surely? Author's Response: Why yes, of course, and you're not the first... fifth... or tenth... person to mention it. When that many people catch a mistake, it's probably time to go back and re-load the chapter.... *sigh*
Author's Response: Darn! I thought I'd caught that. Thanks for reminding me; I'll see if I can't fix it. ;) -K
Author's Response: Oooh, a bookstore job... I know where your paycheck is going! (Or at least, where mine would...) Insightful Ron just pops his head up once in awhile. You'll see him again. :) -K |
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